The Poets: Ewan to Heather
EWAN
Any fears that we may have had that a return
to his studies might
slow Ewan down have completely disappeared.
I was particularly impressed by his poem Dancing which is already
part of the Nexus exhibition collection. Here it is again for us.
The dance of fools, along with the
rest
Multi lingual and multi faceted
displays
Of many distracted views
Canyons of mis-views
Bridging many gulfs
Because we all have canyons to bridge
Before the one true to you is found
And when found, the party begins
Of doubts and misgivings
Inhaled and imbibed
I think a party is better
With Beer bottles rolling
Full blouses and flowing skirts
Music playing and empty fast food
containers
Empty like your heart
Once full but now empty
Making do, with empty promises and
a full blouse.
Dropping - a poem which drives home the
desolation of life in study
halls is another fine piece with its poignant
observation
There was a time
When this was unthinkable
Weak kneed and lazy
Now my 65 yr old uncle
Carries coffee to my table
And I contemplate dropping the lot
I end up dropping two
Even that will be hard.
It must be said that this month, there hasn't
been one poem from Ewan
which didn't have something that lingered in
the mind. As I sort through
the March collection I find myself saying - now
this bit is good, this
is worth talking about - that's nifty, the other
is well expressed. This
makes review time highly enjoyable.. it also
has it's drawbacks. We
would be publishing a three volume novel if I
didn't leave some things
out.
Among the very best this month were and
it ran and ran which is one
of the 'top three'.
And the
damn thing is still running - past the bunny
Out into
the night - Escaping the crutch of the box
Past screaming
owners - arm flapping trainers
And ticket
waving punters
A tongue
lolling run for the money
Leaping
high with an energy it never showed before
Where is
the finish line for this fine dog
Far away
from here, Far away from captivity
And full
food buckets and stupid crimson colours
Ah, what
a dog to run like this
To escape
the clutches of training schedules
Petty little
squabbles over scraps
And win/lose
days.
Also worth a mention: of many -, Kaboom,
Loving
and liking, "Where have all the young men gone? Separate
a remarkable insight into the mind of another person, and another place.
We can now cleanse our country
Of the seeds that we don't want
continues the 'seed' imagery is part of what is
becoming a fascinating
group of poems about the troubles in Eastern
Europe. I'll look at them
in more detail in the next review.
HEATHER
has had trouble with her Scribble feed. It was
during this time
of dearth that she wrote Tree, which I'll
let speak for itself.
A moonlight night, a swaying tree
A sleepless night, just tree and me
I watch the pattern cross my bed
Lacy pattern by moonglow spread.
So much pleasure from that tall tree
Who danced in moonlight just for me.
On still black nights it stood so tall
Like trusted guard on city wall.
Then one day, the chain saw scream
I looked to where my tree had been
When I can't sleep, I miss my tree
My leafy night time company.
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