The Poets:
Porcelina to Zaid
Porcelina posted a 'filk' -The Beautiful Pizza.
I'm looking forward to
seeing what Porcelina will start writing with
all the skills she has
developed during her work on these filks.
The beautiful
pizza
The beautiful
pizza
Our pizzas
cost but our crust is cheesier
How many
times do I have to say
"Will you
eat it here or take it away?"
Terry Bowden continued the apocalyptic series
with Come the Horsemen. I've discussed this poem at length in a
separate message, here it is in uninterrupted entirety for us to think
about all over again.
These
sickly plagues on procreation
put
flies on the face of population
scientists
pressed blind past the edge.
Make
theirs the screams of poesies
that
stripe night airs on ruban bands,
that
scratch and grow in fading furrows,
that
grade and till through silky sands
then
deep as dearth calicivirus burrows.
Love's
head song lorn has poison penned
the
ultimate racial cleanser, pitched
face
forward into world millennium three:
we
sold our bethlehems for seven silver sins.
Full
term a tyrant's birthling pangs
line
tanks avail that swords would swallow
below
the scorched face earth renewed
avengeful
darklord sky burns glow,
raiment
skies flame remnant signs
on
rivers bled of torment floods
and
emptied words more empty fail:
there's
no redemption, we stay in jail.
Tricia Hague-Blackford shared a beautifully balanced
poem in the Death of a child
I hear
an angel
speaking
"Be not grieved
at the death
of thy dear
daughter.."
But my heart
bleeds softly
at the memory
of her playful games
This is beautiful in its direct simplicity.
"and that
ray betook
herself
to the
Most Great
Orb..."
Oh my daughter
You tiny candle in
the darkness
How will you
lighten up
my life
from where
you are?
and beautiful in its gentleness. Thank you Tricia.
Zaid returned after a year long absence. He posted
Five poems of varying quality each written in the past. The most
easily read, and immediately enjoyable was
Weather o weather.
Thunder is
rolling in off the sea
Lightning
is shooting ahead
Rain is
a tumbling, falling and calling
Clouds are
around today
Three changeable verses which conveyed a true
sense of atmosphere and showed a talent for observation. Me is a
large poem filled with
interesting things, many of them poignant. This,
for example:
Since I was
a little child
All I ever
wanted
Was a little
love
Or someone
to say I was special
Even though
nothing special was done
Just saying
it cos it was
What they
thought at the time
Maybe I expect
too much
To feel
special
I Need expressed some basic human longings,
perhaps even basic human rights..
I need to
know I exist
I need to
know you care
I need you
I need to
know you're there
I could say the same to the poets of this Echo:)
Postludum:
Meanwhile, I'm impressed by the standard and
variety of this month's
postings. I see that technique and quality have
improved across the
board and I'm rather proud to know you folk.
I see also that we 'topped the pops' again this month. I know art is not
about quantity, but this is after all, one way to measure the appeal of
what we do. As a rough rule of thumb it takes some beating, because if
there weren't the
quality there wouldn't, so to speak, be any width
to feel.
April is already galloping toward the west. I
hope to catch up soon with
my compliments.
Alice Thorpe
3:56 PM 4/7/99
MARCH STATISTICS
Once again, discussion about poetry, and published
poems
in the NZ-wide SCRIBBLE echo is the highest volume
FidoNet echo in New Zealand. And the figures
are:
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NZ_BUYSELL
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2.6 13 0
334 NZ_RELIGION
80
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599 NZ_FIDONET
72
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61
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122 NZ_HUMOUR
50
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What is this peculiar fascination with
rhyme
that has Scribble top of the bill every time?
Terry Bowden
http://www.nzscribble.net
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