Last year finished with
a thought from Terry which still lingers in my mind..
Does pain or joy await you at end of year
when today another baby boy is born in Bethlehem?
It also saw no Review from me during the last
eight weeks of the year . .
RETROSPECT
I was doing some
thinking, wondering where the Echo was headed, and considering the range
and development of the poets who are writing here. Reviews by one person
are all very well, but I'm not convinced altogether that they don't shut
everyone else up.
JANUARY HIGHLIGHTS
It may seem that
in some ways we've had a quiet month. That has, perhaps, been mood, rather
than fact, for there has been steady, comfortable traffic. Scribble has
been a pleasure to read this month, a good place to be. Ewan has posted
much, Emily has returned, Eddie and Porcelina have been posting steadily,
and Dave has been supporting us all wonderfully. I see in this morning's
package that he has also been writing and writing well. The 'Dot' poem
was among the best things that he has written. His Dreaming poem produced
some interesting discussion, both here and elsewhere. I'm very pleased
with the 'life of its own' development, into another echo.
What were the high points for me?
The poems that have stuck in the mind?
BOB posted two Millennial
poems, as direct response to a challenge by Christine Schiff in the International
Workshop. I was very impressed by his ability to write so well while 'under
instruction' so to speak. That in itself is a talent. Perhaps he was further
helped by the subject matter being 'close to his heart' so to speak.
DAVE's poem 'Dreaming'
was tantalizing. It was so 'nearly' right, and certainly provoked conversation
and continued thought.
Murumph/murumph..Murumph/murumph..
the sound coursed through his veins
vibrating in echoes around in his brain
sticks on hollowed green logs of trees
sounding to be far from home
as he treaded his path alone
Wasn't this a wee gem?
Life is a
page
on which i am a dot
The writer is He
Who created me.
EMILY Bowden's holiday
poems were a breath of fresh air and light. Thank you Emily, I hope you
can continue posting even though the school year has begun again.
From this gem,
posted 31 December 1998
There's the child
She beholds a smile
Spreading across her face.
There's the child
Who beholds a smile
Taking on its pace!
There's the child
She beholds a smile
In its usual place.
to this lovely
moment of freshness
A place
I saw in a dream
Flowing water, cascading stream
Fresh water, waterfalls
All in gleam
I'm looking forward to seeing this poet maturing,
without losing the impression of creative ease and naturalness which is
her greatest asset.
EWAN 'Sachets'
was, without a doubt, the outstanding poem to be posted this month.
Ewan has posted some extremely good poetry this
month, and is to be congratulated on the development he is showing. 'Sachets'
is now posted on www.nzscribble.net/collection/ewesachets.html
their eyes lock
For an instant of time
Understanding flows
Electricity is with it and a knee is
touched
No words are spoken
There is complete and utter understanding
Of the action to take
'A
good crop' was an outstanding mood poem,
He walked on unsteady legs
through the dusk
Fingering the leaves occasionally
And kicking at the soil
Several of those he has posted in the past few days
are up there with his best. Duality, for example, leaves a lasting
taste in the mouth, and Moving sees an old horror through new eyes.
That is one poem I would like to see developed. |