Echo Monthly
Reviewing the Works of Poets,
each month,
with extracts from the best
moments..
* Heather Lennox * Noel Fuller *
Heather Lennox
who returned to the echo and posted in April decided to keep us
on the mark and posted again. Two poems, one a surprisingly delighted song,
unseasonally titled 'Spring' - ah well, dreams are good, and thoughts of
new life with them:
Come with me my lady,
My love.
Into the garden,
My Dove
one could almost dance to this, it is like something out of an olde
anthology, and full and fresh and simple,
The birds sing their joy
My love.
For life is starting
My dove.
The New life is as pointed as Heather's poetic character, this garden
is not all innocence, is it ?
The flowers they do open
My love.
The bees are darting
My dove.
The sun is glowing warm
My love.
Swift flies the Martin
My dove
Carpe Diem: in the midst of autumn comes the reminder of spring,
and
in the poem of new life.. a sense of it's passing.
Heather's other poem : "The Mews is upon me" is a witty, charming
piece of work. For Catlovers - of whom there are many in this echo - there
is much to relate to
This little cat of mine
Grey and white.
Fur so fine,
She's not very bright.
in every line, though perhaps most in the last verse of all..
Here I suffer and sit.
Need a drink.
Caught by 'Kit'.
Gee! Pussified! Stink!
Those who are owned by cats need servants, amen.
Noel Fuller
Another poet who hasn't posted often, but
who has always posted well, is Noel Fuller, who broke his own record, to
post twice in May (happy smile). He may well be surprised - though perhaps
not - to hear that his response to 'A great place' ranks in my mind with
the best poetry. Here it is.. a gem of writing, evocative, full of depth,
and the silent responses of a well tuned love:
" I've enjoyed most being among trees by
myself and sometimes on the fringe of a large group where the many leave
the one wrapped in reverent solitude alone. I do not try to get somewhere
or do anything but be carried into an enchantment by wonder and the
living stillness, with the magic flickering of shadows and light in the
peripheral vision. With the help of insect repellant I tend to come
to rest on some mossy chair and have remained as still as the trees for
hours. This enchantment has come upon me even in that little
park west of upper Queen Street (Auckland) that has such a secret existence.
Even in that small still island amongst the roar and bustle of the city
have I found the vivid sense of an encompassing life uniting all these
strands. Yet I have not been there in years. It is easy to
imagine it built out and forget it is there, perhaps the real heart of
Auckland.
Sometimes I notice in a classroom a child with
a capacity for inner stillness and silence where the greater trees of thought
and imagination may grow."
Thank you for the enormous pleasure this gives me Noel !
Noel's other poem, The Beginning of Disbelief is one of those
works which is greater than the sum of its parts.
Gold at the end of the rainbow?
Always too far for me to go!
One icy morning shrouded in mist
Out the window a rainbow I wist
Low, one end on the road I must go.
Going for milk to the farmer's shed
Barefoot through potholes I sped
Breaking in some a layer of ice
Till in one a rainbow I spied.
Surely this is its end
But of a pot of gold
The oily mud no story told!
Such a simple story, so cleanly told. The atmosphere of shed and
potholes, the dream of gold and the richness of the oily mud on the barefeet
so image the human condition that it is hard to better this apparently
small piece of work. I am filled with admiration, and the desire to do
as well..
* May Review 3 : * Ewan Elliot *
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